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They are my babies 
First of all I think that Michael seems quite feminine here. I think it has something to do with the lips or the long eye lashes, I can't quite pick up on it. I'm not sure what you were going for but...
Second of all, I've noticed that Anahita's hair seems to spike up and blend into Michael's hair at some point. I'm not sure if that was intentional but it doesn't look quite right.
My last point is that Anahita's top seems to be too large for her as there are gaps at both the front and the back of her top. I'm not sure if it was meant to be this way bit I though I'd just pick up on it.
To conclude, your skills are breathtaking and your use of tone and texture make the image realistic. I also really love the little flower, very imaginative.
5 stars all around.
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