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Michael and Anahita

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Sketch of Dan & Emma as my characters Michael and Anahita. 

Still hoping I can draw my characters without real life references :)

~Aty
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:star::star::star::star::star: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star: Impact

Again I must start off by praising you on your wonderful work. It's fairly obvious that you have barely any thing to improve on, however I'm going to be a bit picky here and pick up on the most minor of details.

First of all I think that Michael seems quite feminine here. I think it has something to do with the lips or the long eye lashes, I can't quite pick up on it. I'm not sure what you were going for but...

Second of all, I've noticed that Anahita's hair seems to spike up and blend into Michael's hair at some point. I'm not sure if that was intentional but it doesn't look quite right. <img src="e.deviantart.net/emoticons/b/b…" width="15" height="15" alt=":B" title="Bucktooth"/> It's nothing major.

My last point is that Anahita's top seems to be too large for her as there are gaps at both the front and the back of her top. I'm not sure if it was meant to be this way bit I though I'd just pick up on it.

To conclude, your skills are breathtaking and your use of tone and texture make the image realistic. I also really love the little flower, very imaginative.

5 stars all around.