Michael Sullivan, the main narrator of my original novel ([link])
- Don't forget to visit & join this awesome group Alex has made to collect arts of all the people in AE's cast list:
xoxo ~Aty
-------- A4 SIZE -- > FABER-CASTELL + STAEDTLER + OWNER -- > 22 Hours /// Daniel Radcliffe -------- -------- COVER ART & MORE ART FOR MY NOVEL "THE AUTUMNAL EQUINOX" : --------
> FACEBOOK: [link] > TUMBLR: [link] > TWITTER: [link] > Alex's full cast for my story here: [link] > If you're interested in more arts/drawings of the people named in that cast list, or you simply like my style, don't forget to ADD ME TO YOUR WATCH LIST! > I do really want to publish this story one day, so it's not online. But I'll be sending many arts (character portraits, scene arts, chapter arts) about the Autumnal Equinox. Wish me luck!
Wow, this is really is wonderful. I love your use of tone and texture, it looks 3D and very realistic. I also love your colour splash with the blue eyes.
The hair is very good, as is the eyebrows. Your proportions are amazing and your anatomy is wonderful.
If anything, I'd say that the shading beneath the bottom lip makes it look like there is a deep dip (too deep) in his chin. Perhaps less harsh shading could correct that.
Other than that I can't really tell you how to improve because I can't really see anything needed to improve.
The hair is very good, as is the eyebrows. Your proportions are amazing and your anatomy is wonderful.
If anything, I'd say that the shading beneath the bottom lip makes it look like there is a deep dip (too deep) in his chin. Perhaps less harsh shading could correct that.
Other than that I can't really tell you how to improve because I can't really see anything needed to improve.
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