CLOSE-UP: Michael and Anahita

First of all I would like to say, this is very well done! the shading is very precise and clean. No smudges or anything of the sort. The light on Emmas hair is brilliantly shaded. You portrayed Dan and Emma so well. The fact that you added blue and a squash color to their eyes is very unique and original. Capturing the eyes is usually one of the hardest parts of a drawing but usually it makes the drawing and you have done that very well! Perhaps you could have added a bit more blue to Dan's eye's so they stand out a bit more but they look great. Also Dan's shirt could use a little bit more attention but other than that I see nothing wrong with this drawing! You have a lot of talent, and may I add that Emma's eyelashes are very well done! I love this drawing, you did an excellent job!